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No fancy boldings or italics right now, sorry :P

Looks like we got this page up in time, good news for you guys! This went through a slight editing before it moved on, and overall I think it flows much better. But it could still do with some improvements.

Overall I like this one. Don't worry, the fight scene isn't over just yet even if the other guy did collapse, there's still a minimum of maybe 3 comics left. That's another thing I'll have to work on, the pacing of this comic. We wouldn't want it to drag out too long or be too short, so that'll be something to learn along the way.

Tune in next week for page 14!

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